Real Me

Oh, My Friend ! My Dear !
I don’t think I’m blind…
I will fight my fear
To clear up my mind.
I will leave my story
Somewhere far, behind.
I will live in glory
With someone who’s kind.
With someone who’ll never
Hurt me or assault.
I’ll forget, forever,
Guilty pain and fault.
I’ll be flying, swimming,
Smiling everyday.
Even though, it’s dreaming,
I won’t be the same !!!
It’s a shame – me crying,
Whipping like a dog…
I’m just hardly… trying… 
Find a way through fog…
There's no sense to doubt…
Only if I see,
That I should find out,
Who is real Me…

January 2008
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Loving Iii Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 4:00 PM
good work. refreshing to find some one new and from where i wish to know. my time is up time to go . john h loving iii
Burton Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 11:26 AM
this poem was very nice and poetic. will read more of you. great poem
Spence Sr Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 1:28 AM
This is an excellent narrative poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. The sun will shine in the morning. Darkness shall not last forever. Great job! ~Joseph
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