Real Love

Real Love
Love is like a desire,
so pleasant,
It could take you to Heaven 
Or straight to Hell,
were you won't dwell.
It's like magic 
As you master it,
It vanishes.
Starts as a flower, 
So lovely,
Ends like a snake, So deadly.
It could revive you 
In an instant,
And could kill you, In seconds.
If this love is true
It will take to Heaven, It will never vanish,
It will be as lovely as always,
And it will revive you 'till
The end of time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Agustin Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 3:28 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Nicely written Rafael. enjoyed LINDA
A  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Rafael, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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