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Real Love

Real Love Love is like a desire, so pleasant, It could take you to Heaven Or straight to Hell, were you won't dwell. It's like magic As you master it, It vanishes. Starts as a flower, So lovely, Ends like a snake, So deadly. It could revive you In an instant, And could kill you, In seconds. If this love is true It will take to Heaven, It will never vanish, It will be as lovely as always, And it will revive you 'till The end of time.

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Date: 12/30/2024 3:28:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:34:00 PM
Nicely written Rafael. enjoyed LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:45:00 PM
Rafael, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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