Real Grief

I heard real grief only two days ago,
from the tellers lips who told me so:
He'd reached the end of his tether that day.
he wanted to end his life some way!

He said he'd insulted family and friends
with things so horrible he'd reached a dead end:
no turning back from the course he now chose
this was it, his life must close.

I thought for a moment and gave this reply;
"Better to seek forgiveness before you die.
Your family will never really understand
why you did something so terribly underhand.
I'm sure they will all be there for you
to give advice that will help you get through!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 4, 2013 at 9:13 PM
nice win Robert, , congrats......... SKAT
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 8:17 AM
congrats on your win, we all need someone to give us good advice now and then!
Davidson Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 9:08 AM
thanks Stacey I also sent him my other recent poem An Aid to Depression and Trouble these have helped and the person in question is now attending AA meetings.
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 5:53 PM
that was good advice he got. And I see you won the contest too. Congrats to you!
Guzzi Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 1:35 PM
Excellent advice in this verse [do not hestitate to 'ed' a word when it flows better simply to make the end rhyme appear perfect, you can safely stick an 'ed' on the end of 'underhanded' ;) Thanks for stopping by my writing. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 4:25 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Robert
Adams Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 6:20 PM
I have known a few that reached that rope in life and we never understand why...good write, congrats on your win :)
Davidson Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 3:53 AM
Thanks Sandra it is very kind of you, this is a very close relative and pleased to say there has been some positive signs in the last week. Robert
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations Robert , well done xx
Davidson Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations to you as well. This poem has helped someone. Robert
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