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DEDICATED TO A TRUE GEM , MY AMAZING FRIEND CHRIS WHO HAS GOT ME THROUGH THE TOUGHEST TIMES OF MY LIFE ESPECIALLY WHEN MY HUSBAND HAD CANCER AND I HAD LITTLE SUPPORT FROM MY IMMEDIATE FAMILY, AND TO AN AWESOME POETESS WHO HAS HELPED AND ENCOURAGED ME WITH MY POETRY AND BECOME TREASURED SOUPER FRIEND

A real friend is a diamond; you know they’ll go that extra mile in all aspects of your life they will support you all the while Their honesty is appreciated, their opinions you won’t dismiss, especially when you ask them does my tush look huge in this! They are never quick to judge you and will listen to your fears, at sad times they’ll hold you tight and mop your torrent of tears True friends are rare gems to be cherished, on them you can depend, you know in your heart they’ll be with you, right to the very end A poetry princess has nurtured me On her guidance I can always depend She gives sound advice on my poetry I’m honoured that she’s my ‘souper’ friend Qualities you admire in friends Contest Sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire 6/19/18

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Date: 6/27/2018 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful friendship poem. And your sincere tribute to your friends. Yours touched my heart with its gratitude. :)
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Date: 6/27/2018 11:18:00 AM
Jan, your words express the true meaning of friendship beautifully. So happy you have great friends in your life. Congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 6/27/2018 8:26:00 AM
Well done on a great win. Faux
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Date: 6/26/2018 4:54:00 PM
Very nicely done; your pen is magical.
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Date: 6/26/2018 4:33:00 PM
I knew I would see this lovely poem on the winner's list. I am so happy you had the support of your friend Chris during your worries over your husband's health. Congratulations on your win Jan. xxoo
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Date: 6/26/2018 4:18:00 PM
Congrats! So true, asking how do I look in this?
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Date: 6/26/2018 3:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan, well done. John
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Date: 6/26/2018 2:20:00 PM
Jan, you are the friend who is the real diamond in your poem. You sparkle like the fresh morning dew and the first snowfall of winter. You shine brightly!
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Date: 6/26/2018 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations Jan, Tom.
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Date: 6/26/2018 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,,, Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/26/2018 11:51:00 AM
You did a lovely job with this poem, Jan. Congratulations on your win. (Not sure, but since this poem is yours, perhaps it was written for Andrea ??) Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:29:00 PM
You can choose your friends but you can't choose your family. So choose well. Can you please read my poem Fresh Baked Bread and tell me what you think please Jan. Ta hope you are well.Cheers
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Date: 6/20/2018 10:47:00 PM
Hi Jan, What a moving and touching write on friendship. It is a wonderful thing to have a "true" friend that is there for you no matter what. Friends can become like family. Jan you seem like an amazing person. You and Chris are lucky to have found each other. As far as your soup friend goes it just has to be me. All jokes aside I think it's Andrea( she's awesome by the way) but I know you're not going to tell. I think you penned yourself a winner .I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/20/2018 4:10:00 PM
A wonderfully written tribute to friendship Jan! It is the same way I feel about friendship. They are indeed a treasure. xxoo
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Date: 6/20/2018 1:38:00 PM
Amazing tribute.. friends make such an incredible difference in our lives. So glad that we are buds, Jan!
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Date: 6/20/2018 12:46:00 PM
A lovely tribute and all of what you said is true. AWESOME . love phyl
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Date: 6/20/2018 10:43:00 AM
All of it is so true, well done Jan and best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 6/20/2018 8:54:00 AM
Such a beautiful poetic tribute, Jan. Well done! This poem should win the contest. // Warren :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 5:26:00 PM
aww thanks Warren. that would be lovely but I've seen some wonderful entries so I just write and hope the sponsor likes my idea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/20/2018 8:29:00 AM
What a thoughtful dedication to Chris. It wRms my heart to read this piece.
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Date: 6/24/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Rick, she catches up with my poems on a regular basis I hope she reads this one soon:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2018 10:31:00 PM
Yes real friends are sadly under rated, and large tushs are as well!!.....80)
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Date: 6/20/2018 4:04:00 AM
Lol Pat my hubby prefers smaller ones:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2018 8:04:00 PM
A heartfelt tribute, Jan. (soup mail) :) gw
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Date: 6/20/2018 4:01:00 AM
Thanks for the mail Gershon, you should post that little gem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2018 7:27:00 PM
Beautiful tribute, Jan, love what you did with the prompt. I am glad you have these friends in your life.
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Date: 6/20/2018 4:00:00 AM
I am truly blessed Agnes, we have three friends in particular who have been a tower of strength to us both during my bubbles cancer journey, the couple we have known for over twenty years and Chris for a shorter time:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2018 5:50:00 PM
This is really beautiful, Jan. One of the best ones I have seen entered in the contest. I really like your approach on both verses!!
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:31:00 PM
aww thanks Andrea, I wrote 6 lines (from the bottom up lol) then hit a brick wall but finally managed to get it finished. i hope Carolyn and jack like it, I've seen some awesome friendship poems and lovely tributes to soupers. It's fun trying to work out who they are written about:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2018 5:38:00 PM
A real friend is a diamond indeed, they are few and far between. When you find one you better keep it real. Loved it.
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:29:00 PM
True friends are rare and precious like d grade flawless diamonds and are to be cherished forever:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2018 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful Tribute Jan! Very special :)
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Date: 6/19/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
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