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Real Concern

Right when I think Each And every thought I have is cared about with real Love by him it's dashed with his thoughtless Comments. Over and over it's seems like Nothing I do is really appreciated. Can I really take on the Ever Reaching task of taking the first step and feeling Nothing but "lost" in the process?

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Date: 7/30/2012 2:11:00 PM
Wonderful Acrostic. Love is a give and receive thing, to always give and not receive leaves one stunted, unable to grow. Best wishes. :) Tanya
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