Real

If this is true 
And something not 
I want to know
All I forgot

What I’ve seen
And what I’ve heard
Everything.
Its all absurd 

I want to know 
What I’ve done wrong 
What I’ve done right
If I make your day
As well as night

I need to know 
How you feel 
And if that feeling 
Is really real
 
All I want
through and through
And forever 
Is to be with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 8:04 AM
i love your love poems and i'm not a big fan of lovey dovey stuff, but you make it work!
Moreno Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 12:47 AM
A nice sentiment...Raul
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