Ready To Give Up

There seems
     no dream 
          on which I dwell
Just life, 
     my strife, 
          my lonely hell
I wander 
     and wonder 
          if all is true
Until I see 
     what could be 
          with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Michael this short poem speaks in volumes - Great expression of raw emotion - God Bless, MJ
Strand Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 12:09 AM
I like the presentation and of course yhe theme.Michael.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 11:05 AM
A small poem with so much to say! Great one, Michael...so filled with heartfelt meaning! ~love Carrie
P. Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 6:17 AM
gosh this is beautiful! great meaning!! ~ Arany
Atanacio Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 5:07 AM
wow-- again just have to sit back snap twice and read these little gems :)
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