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Hutinashro

Created by Connor Lotts...each line has 8 syllables. Iambic tetrameter is optional. Divide the poem into 3 stanzas, 12 lines in the first 2 stanzas with an Aabccbddbeeb rhyme scheme. The first two stanzas share the first line. The last stanza, is 3 lines with an aba rhyme scheme.

There is room in my heart for two, but not just anyone will do. It's reserved for a unique soul, the missing piece of my puzzle. A soulmate who likes to nuzzle and enjoys a long moonlit stroll. For I'll not give away my heart only to have it torn apart. I need to feel complete and whole and not like something is missing. Love goes beyond hugs and kissing; feeling wanted... plays a big role. There is room in my heart for two, and I pray there's room in yours, too. If I let my heart have its way, it would gladly invite you in. It feels love's magic stir within, and like a child, it wants to play. When we talk and lose track of time, my anxieties cease to climb. I found my missing piece: the day I realized you were real. I can't verbalize what I feel, knowing that I'm loved every day! My heart has found its perfect fit, for together, I feel complete, and I am ready to commit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/6/2018 8:59:00 PM
Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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