Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Reader of the Stars - Collaboration

A reader of the stars am I. I’ve looked
into my crystal ball. Guess what I saw?
The woman of your dreams! You will be hooked
because her charms will fill your heart with awe.
A female with green eyes and princess ways,
she also has a bit of gypsy soul!
With her you will be blessed all of your days.
She is the other half to make you whole.
She’ll challenge you; together you will grow.
One other thing to know . . . curiously
she very much seems to resemble me!

Sept. 3, 2020 
for Line Gauthier's Max 12 Lines - Poem-Inspired Prompt Poetry Contest
You can see her little poem that inspired this collaboration over at the contest pages.

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Angela Crabtree October 1, 2020 at 6:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Andrea! This is a very mysterious write. I like it a lot. Please keep on writing. You're so good at it. Love, Angie

Newton Ranaweera September 12, 2020 at 1:59 PM Congratulations, Andrea, on our top win!! It's a great piece!! Newton Ranaweera September 13, 2020 at 5:31 PM No, Andrea, mine didn't get any placement in this. Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2020 at 7:16 PM top?? Anyway, congrats to you too I guess. Did you get HM with me?

Lindsay Laurie September 5, 2020 at 5:31 PM Hello Andrea … written so like the lines of a sonnet. Flow and rhyme just beaut as usual Andrea - Lindsay Andrea Dietrich September 5, 2020 at 7:48 PM thanks, it originally WAS a sonnet until I looked at her rules again and noticed it had a line limit, so it's pared down a bit!!

M. L. Kiser September 5, 2020 at 9:52 AM Lol, a fun piece.

Paul Callus September 5, 2020 at 2:14 AM Lovely and romantic, Andrea, and the ending comes with a smile:) Line will love it! Regards // paul

Robert Lindley September 4, 2020 at 7:12 AM " With her you will be blessed all of your days." And so it tis.. A truly wonderful verse and a magnificent and true message given on love, life and that which we should be more aware of my friend. A fav-- a gem too.. God bless..

Sigrid Ermine September 4, 2020 at 1:51 AM So sweet, last part perfectly said! Very very neatly unfurling verse. Line will adore it!

Quoth Theraven September 3, 2020 at 8:23 PM 'A female with green eyes and princess ways, she also has a bit of gypsy soul!' Glad that you've still kept it. What a treasure it is. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues September 3, 2020 at 4:33 PM A very cute ending!

John Watt September 3, 2020 at 1:36 PM This is adorable Andrea! You took those 6 phrases Line offered and made a compelling romantic sonnet with a fun surprise ending. A fave for me, I think you've penned a winner!