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I got a story! I want you to hear! It starts off with a little fear. Then creeps to something very near. Like your bed... So it starts to shake. As it takes it's claws and rakes. It reaches it's top , starting to brake. OH Crap! it's in your face.... So it slides. Leaving a trail of grime. Waiting for us to slip and fall behind. So it can trap us and eats us all!... But now were at the end! So it depends. Did ya like my story? (AHA!! what a fail!)

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Date: 1/28/2011 4:50:00 PM
Enjoyed it. nice funny and intriguing write, kristenna
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:46:00 PM
LOL yea my dear Poet I didgood rhymes in ths one...luv Michael
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