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Read Between The Lines It was the point of a meaningless moon, That being dealt life, its absolute gloom, Vague stars shone hope to reposed past of Earth, Dusk hath casts a crazed eve, pure hueless girth, Joint lives of suave views have spread neath vain space, Twain hearts of faint aims bent at an odd place, Hath time rose, it was at a library, Heartbeats are intact, waft of rare moon, free, Scene set single swift shift that sways said lives, When immortal kiss filled, hatched modern drives, Flash of bliss, sum less than a week, pithy, Souls warp sovereign time a dichotomy, Ageless Sun o'er timeless Earth, midst readers, Pave periods, us, episode writers, Two; songbooks split, both sung; books wrote, both said, A book close, ashes to ashes, rites read, Ode paid, poet refrains, anew begun, ...Chapter One. ***No regrets, separate lives lived since my first kiss experience, though death came at mid-life, both of us had a fulfilled life, and for that, I am content. 2019 October 11 *2nd Place* If only we could turn back the hands of time ~~Silent One

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Date: 11/10/2019 2:35:00 PM
Hello William Kekaula, I am glad that you are content in your life, not too many people are. Have a nice day my friend.Aloha Darlene
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Date: 11/10/2019 4:45:00 PM
You have my heartfelt thanks indeed ~ Aloha always William
Date: 10/15/2019 9:56:00 AM
This poem floors me my friend. From its classic feel to its depths and its flow- the thoughts it births in this old poet's head and heart. Congrats on you win and this is a fav I am very pleased to add to my growing list!
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Date: 10/15/2019 1:24:00 PM
A grateful thanks for you honor me ~ Aloha always William
Date: 10/15/2019 3:06:00 AM
Congrats and God bless you, Gina
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Date: 10/15/2019 4:49:00 AM
Amen Gina ~ Aloha always, William
Date: 10/14/2019 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations for your win William :)
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:52:00 PM
My many thanks ~ Aloha always William
Date: 10/14/2019 12:28:00 PM
sometimes it is not so easy to ready between the lines.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:51:00 PM
My appreciation for my high placement ~ Aloha always William

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