Reaching the Sky
The words of my prayers, wings obtained and
Reached the sky*
As
The selfishness of my feelings has helped them
To soar up high!
© Demetrios Trifiatis
22 FEBRUARY 2015
*NOTE: Dear friends, my poem “REACHING THE SKY” was posted on the 22 February 2015, It has received the comments bellow but, unfortunately, the poem was deleted so I repost it for the record! Of course anyone wishing to comment is welcome! Thank you all for your comments!
Comments received:
David Meade Date: 2/22/2015 3:55:00 PM
“With groans and sighs, our prayers ascend to the sky, to one who longs to hear and respond. Lovey dear friend. 7”
Eve Roper Date: 2/22/2015 1:00:00 PM
“I sure enjoy your daily inspiring writes. Love this beautiful prayer. Blessings dear friend”
Ravi Sathasivam Date: 2/22/2015 7:37:00 AM
“Excellent prayer. Penned well. Tfs”
JAN ALLISON Date: 2/22/2015 7:29:00 AM
“Such a beautiful prayer Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx”
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2015 6:30:00 AM –
“Beautiful prayer my friend Demetrios ! (a 7) - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)”
Kim Patrice Nunez Date: 2/22/2015 4:49:00 AM
“Reading one from you has become a daily part of Soup experience, sire. Again, I was not disappointed. May all our prayers be answered. Smiles all the way from the thousand isles. :D Kim”
Eileen Manassian Date: 2/22/2015 3:55:00 AM
“Lovely prayer....Happy Sunday, my dear poet. Sending love...”
Amolkumar Udarwar Date: 2/22/2015 1:59:00 AM
“Ur pen has sky as the limit...sir ..hugs Amol”
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