Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Epigram

Reaching the Sky

The words of my prayers, wings obtained and

Reached the sky* 

As 

The selfishness of my feelings has helped them

To soar up high!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
   22 FEBRUARY 2015





*NOTE: Dear friends, my poem “REACHING THE SKY” was posted on the 22 February 2015, It has received the comments bellow but, unfortunately, the poem was deleted so I repost it for the record! Of course anyone wishing to comment is welcome! Thank you all for your comments!

Comments received:

David Meade Date: 2/22/2015 3:55:00 PM 
“With groans and sighs, our prayers ascend to the sky, to one who longs to hear and respond. Lovey dear friend. 7” 

Eve Roper Date: 2/22/2015 1:00:00 PM 
“I sure enjoy your daily inspiring writes. Love this beautiful prayer. Blessings dear friend”
 
Ravi Sathasivam Date: 2/22/2015 7:37:00 AM 
“Excellent prayer. Penned well. Tfs” 

JAN ALLISON Date: 2/22/2015 7:29:00 AM 
“Such a beautiful prayer Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx” 

 Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2015 6:30:00 AM – 
“Beautiful prayer my friend Demetrios ! (a 7) - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)”

 Kim Patrice Nunez Date: 2/22/2015 4:49:00 AM 
“Reading one from you has become a daily part of Soup experience, sire. Again, I was not disappointed. May all our prayers be answered. Smiles all the way from the thousand isles. :D Kim”
 
Eileen Manassian Date: 2/22/2015 3:55:00 AM 
“Lovely prayer....Happy Sunday, my dear poet. Sending love...”

Amolkumar Udarwar Date: 2/22/2015 1:59:00 AM 
“Ur pen has sky as the limit...sir ..hugs Amol”

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M. L. Kiser February 25, 2015 at 5:57 PM Glad that you reposted it...so true. Demetrios Trifiatis February 26, 2015 at 7:58 AM Thank you my dearest friend, M.L. Kiser! You are so kind!

Richard Lamoureux February 24, 2015 at 7:11 AM Reaching for God is the most rewarded act of selfishness, what better gift could we receive? I enjoyed your thought provoking piece Demetrios. Demetrios Trifiatis February 24, 2015 at 7:15 AM Thank you, Richard, I know you understand when I say no other subject touches my soul with such force as when, directly or indirectly, I write about our Lord!

Yoran Schulte February 23, 2015 at 1:18 PM I really like this one! very inspiring! If you want even more people to see this, you might wanna check out www.talevault.com ^^ my account there is Parraloco. You can read and write poetry there ;D Make sure to send me your account name so i can keep track of what you post have a nice day! Demetrios Trifiatis February 23, 2015 at 1:56 PM Thank you, Yoran, for your kind visit and comment! Yes, I will check the site you mention although I am not that good with the internet! I might need help. Thank you again though!

Njeri Hunjeri February 23, 2015 at 1:10 PM I love it!! Am glad you reposted it. Blessings to you my friend. Demetrios Trifiatis February 23, 2015 at 1:54 PM Njeri, my dear, thank you very much for your precious visit!

Jan Allison February 23, 2015 at 12:52 PM Such a beautiful prayer Demetrios:-) Have to add my comment again as I am sincere in what I write my friend:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx Demetrios Trifiatis February 23, 2015 at 1:53 PM My dearest good friend, Jan, thank you so much for commenting again! A deeply appreciate it!