Reaching Out

From a lonely grave a broken heart reaches out  
Touches within my intermost being without a doubt

Did she not have any courage left within her grasp
A tiny bit to help her cling on and a small hand to clasp

Wondering for years what really happened back then
Accidental poisoning or suicide in the glen

Six days she lingered in agony's strong grip
Was she able to repent and leave on the gospel ship?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Anish Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 9:47 PM
You have several poems about someone you know who killed themselves. You capture the sorrow well in your work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 9:08 PM
This one was sad. Maybe she was truly killed? I am so curious to know what made you write of this. i liked it.
Muideen Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 6:25 PM
The smooth flow of your write depicted an imagery that brought to the readers sense the distress that within......I like how it was constructed it is extreme brilliant an excellent........love always........A.M.
Nayak Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Dear Sara, a deep thought provoking write....kudos! Loads of love, Anu:-)
Peranteau Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Wow, powerful display of write dear poet! Thought provoking...have a wonderful weekend Sara....much love, james
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 8:24 AM
- A touching poem, Sara - Lovely written - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Muideen Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 1:46 AM
A well and an eloquent write. Don't seem to get it right...love.........A.M.
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