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Stretching, aching metaphorical life. You weren't s'posed to be horrible. You were s'posed to be 'mazing tipsy without hazing... So what happened? Speak to me, sage for I'm dying for that bit of wisdom that my ancestors foraged to skirt around goin' to prison. ah... stormy clouds concrete mounds towers, showers may as well be clowns in my choosiness I laugh. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written by Nancy Jones on the tenth of August, 2011

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Date: 8/12/2011 5:21:00 AM
Towers n showers and stormy clouds, a smile is here with me allowed :) great babe, xo, Don
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:08:00 PM
I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:36:00 PM
a well written and very creative write. thank you for commenting on Monroe Hotel. you know i don't try to write forms, it just messes me up, if it turns out to be a certain form, then find. If i would change the way i wrote Monroe Hotel, it could change the whole meaning, we put to much in to writing forms, just write a poem and enjoy yourself. I know you were just trying to help, but i am not a pro poet. I write to let others know what happend in the past and how i feel.
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:18:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your very interesting writing today Nancy. Thank you for posting your poetry for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 1:46:00 PM
Clever write, Nancy. Yes, my poem did work better your way!
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:35:00 AM
Hi Nancy, am finding new people all the time and I enjoyed your lovely verse.
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Date: 8/10/2011 9:27:00 PM
I love the twists in the poem! Great work!!
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