Razor Blade

im gonna paint a picture,
a picture with a twist.
im gonna paint a picture,
i'll paint it on my wrist.
and if i paint this picture right,
a fountain will appear.
and then one day,
all my troubles will disapear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Agustin Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 5:03 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 10, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Briana, deep write... LINDA
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July 19, 2015 at 5:13 PM
bRIANA, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
Shahbaz Avatar
October 23, 2008 at 12:36 PM
wow, i love this. this poem is simply amazing :) and i can totally relate to what you've written.
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October 23, 2008 at 2:02 AM
This is great. Good flow, good technique. Lisa
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