Rays of Hope

the Daffodils bloom
          bright yellow in the garden
               shining rays of hope


Heidi Sands

4/24/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 7:06 PM
Daffodils have such confidence they give me hope too.
Sands Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Yes, they are bright and beautiful. Thank you Caren. I hope you have a nice day :)
May Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Sunshine in the garden, Lovely haiku Heidi, hugs
Sands Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Yes, they are very bright. Thank you. I appreciate your comments :)
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 6:53 PM
Yes, indeed. Let those rays shine on. Nicely penned, Heidi! :) gw
Sands Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 7:10 PM
Yes Gershon. Shine on my friend. Thank you. Goodnight :)
Proxenos Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:06 AM
It is such a shame that daffodils die so quickly, but not before their bright yellow in the garden assures you that they are sending sunkissed shining rays of hope. Brilliant Heidi, a fave. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate your comments and the Fave. I hope all is well and you have a nice day today :)
Romios Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 2:44 PM
Loved the imagery in this, Heidu Hugs, Pangie xx
Sands Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Thank you Pangie :)
Pandit Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Pleasant write, Heidi--enjoyed its happy tone.
Sands Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Vijay. Glad to hear you enjoyed it! Have a nice evening, my friend :)
Rees Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Nicely chosen words. The treasured hope of looking forward to better, brighter, less chilling days.
Sands Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Thank you very much Peter :)
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