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Raw Onions

raw onions
falling tears
seasoning


Form: Ellip

Copyright © Tahera Mannan | Year Posted 2013

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James Marshall Goff

September 30, 2015 at 7:04 AM

yes, wonderful

March 22, 2013 at 9:47 AM

Oh, brilliant! Just love it!!....xx Holly Moore

March 7, 2013 at 1:20 PM

belated congrats on your win...David

March 5, 2013 at 8:21 AM

Love the flavor onions add to so many dishes. Enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your HM in the contest. Well done !!

Lori Lucas Mcclure

March 5, 2013 at 5:53 AM

congratulations on your fine win! Lori

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 5, 2013 at 2:04 AM

Congrats on your HM Tahera, I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx

March 4, 2013 at 11:49 AM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Tahera! Love, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

March 4, 2013 at 10:14 AM

Tahera, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

February 28, 2013 at 8:31 PM

!!! = shorthand for excellent

February 28, 2013 at 9:21 PM

Cutting raw onions brings tears and since they are salty,seasoning.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2013 at 5:12 PM

oh, i really like this one. I adore onions!! and they don't make me cry because I chop them while wearing my contact lenses!

February 26, 2013 at 3:04 AM

Very nice Tahera!Best wishes to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 25, 2013 at 11:40 PM

- lot of rain in Norway ..... it would be many tears .... Well done Haiku, Tahera. -Have a lovely day in the sunshine! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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