Raw Onions

raw onions
falling tears
seasoning


Form: Ellip

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/30/2015 7:04:00 AM
yes, wonderful
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Date: 3/22/2013 9:47:00 AM
Oh, brilliant! Just love it!!....xx Holly Moore
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:20:00 PM
belated congrats on your win...David
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Date: 3/5/2013 8:21:00 AM
Love the flavor onions add to so many dishes. Enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your HM in the contest. Well done !!
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Date: 3/5/2013 5:53:00 AM
congratulations on your fine win! Lori
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Date: 3/5/2013 2:04:00 AM
Congrats on your HM Tahera, I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx
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Date: 3/4/2013 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Tahera! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/4/2013 10:14:00 AM
Tahera, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/28/2013 8:31:00 PM
!!! = shorthand for excellent
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 2/28/2013 9:21:00 PM
Cutting raw onions brings tears and since they are salty,seasoning.
Date: 2/26/2013 5:12:00 PM
oh, i really like this one. I adore onions!! and they don't make me cry because I chop them while wearing my contact lenses!
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Date: 2/26/2013 3:04:00 AM
Very nice Tahera!Best wishes to you.
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Date: 2/25/2013 11:40:00 PM
- lot of rain in Norway ..... it would be many tears .... Well done Haiku, Tahera. -Have a lovely day in the sunshine! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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