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Raw Honey

She captures his thoughts 
and drapes them across her lips to
see what he tastes like



*I know I messed up the syllables, but it looked better like this*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 2, 2012 at 4:21 PM
Smile ~ Hi Baby, i really love this poe but i bet that she taste even better; her lips that is; honey from a sweet honeybee vine ~ Smile ~ I miss your precious beauty Micaela ~ So very special & gifted you are my dear, dear lady ~ Happy Easter Baby * Love always, John!:) ~
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December 6, 2009 at 9:21 AM
He sounds quite delicious, Micaela! Don't worry about the syllable count, this poem stands on its own merits. Great write! Love, Carolyn
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December 3, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Thank you Micaela for sharing your amazing poetry with us all today. I enjoyed the read. Love, Carol
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December 2, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Very interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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