Raw Deal

confusion,delusion
thoughts that aren't real
the things that i see
the way that i feel
not sure what is there
don't know whats real
believing more each day
that i got a raw deal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 21, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Danny love it..skat
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December 28, 2010 at 11:47 AM
could be. tnk
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