Raw

Raw feeling undiluted, 
Raw years of a deep yearning,
One of fulfilment of a role long left vacant, 
Let my raw wounds tell a story, 
Let them fill my tears with phrases
Like melodic chimes on a winter morning. 

Cunning black dilapidate in a ravenous thunder;
My love for you almost poisonous 
But permanently tattooed in my heart
Till when will my cries be on mute? 
Till when will your love stop being a craving, 
A drug needed to intoxicate my once intoxicated heart 

You cry but your tears are like daggers, 
Conspiring together to tear to shreds a once free flying butterfly
Leaving a raw taste of emptiness 
Crinkled up with no hope of a better day

L. Ngema
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 13, 2018 at 3:16 AM
Raw indeed and powerful.. beautifully expressed Luyanda..thank you.
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