Marilene Evans Poet Verse

Ravished

RAVISHED

Ravished with joy, delight,
refreshes my being.
Releases my tensions,
relaxes my senses,
resulting in pure bliss.
Rapturously feeling
radiant and glowing. 


4/14/21   Pleiades R Poetry
               Kim Merryman

Checked:  How Many Syllables

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Susan Ashley April 20, 2021 at 5:55 PM This is so beautiful, Marilene, your imagery rides your poetic lines with charming grace. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Marilene Evans April 20, 2021 at 7:09 PM Thanks so much, Susan. I appreciate it. Have a great evening.

Jan Allison April 19, 2021 at 5:28 PM very well expressed Marilene many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Marilene Evans April 19, 2021 at 6:23 PM Thank you, Jan. Hugs to you too. Have a great evening.

Kim Merryman April 19, 2021 at 4:00 PM Very expressive and smooth flowing, Marilene! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Marilene Evans April 19, 2021 at 4:09 PM Thank you. Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Have a great evening, Kim.

Joseph May April 19, 2021 at 9:56 AM Nicely done Marilene, Congrats on your win.. Marilene Evans April 19, 2021 at 10:01 AM Thanks, Joseph. I appreciate it. Have a great day.

Alexis Y. April 14, 2021 at 5:37 PM Wow! Marilene, You described your title very well. Good job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Marilene Evans April 14, 2021 at 5:48 PM Thank you. Thank you. Have a great evening.

Sara Kendrick April 14, 2021 at 4:26 PM Ahh!! Very expressive lines you have penned in this one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara Marilene Evans April 14, 2021 at 4:48 PM Thanks so much, Sara. Have a great evening.

Sam Kauffman April 14, 2021 at 12:50 PM Totally delightful and positively "ravishing" Marilene. This Pleiades literally jumps off the page with "radiant" joy. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings! Sam Kauffman April 16, 2021 at 3:03 PM Wow! Hayward is at the other end of the bridge from us - Foster City/San Mateo anchors the west end of the bridge while Hayward anchors the east end of the bridge. Hope you well! Bay Area blessings to you! Marilene Evans April 14, 2021 at 4:07 PM Thanks Sam! BTW, I was up North visiting my daughter. Drove to Napa, Santa Rosa, Marin County back to Hayward.