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Ravished

RAVISHED Ravished with joy, delight, refreshes my being. Releases my tensions, relaxes my senses, resulting in pure bliss. Rapturously feeling radiant and glowing. 4/14/21 Pleiades R Poetry Kim Merryman Checked: How Many Syllables

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/20/2021 5:55:00 PM

This is so beautiful, Marilene, your imagery rides your poetic lines with charming grace. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/20/2021 7:09:00 PM

Thanks so much, Susan. I appreciate it. Have a great evening.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2021 5:28:00 PM

very well expressed Marilene many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/19/2021 6:23:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Hugs to you too. Have a great evening.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2021 4:00:00 PM

Very expressive and smooth flowing, Marilene! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/19/2021 4:09:00 PM

Thank you. Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Have a great evening, Kim.

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2021 9:56:00 AM

Nicely done Marilene, Congrats on your win..

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/19/2021 10:01:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph. I appreciate it. Have a great day.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/14/2021 5:37:00 PM

Wow! Marilene, You described your title very well. Good job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/14/2021 5:48:00 PM

Thank you. Thank you. Have a great evening.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2021 4:26:00 PM

Ahh!! Very expressive lines you have penned in this one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/14/2021 4:48:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sara. Have a great evening.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/14/2021 12:50:00 PM

Totally delightful and positively "ravishing" Marilene. This Pleiades literally jumps off the page with "radiant" joy. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 3:03:00 PM

Wow! Hayward is at the other end of the bridge from us - Foster City/San Mateo anchors the west end of the bridge while Hayward anchors the east end of the bridge. Hope you well! Bay Area blessings to you!

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/14/2021 4:07:00 PM

Thanks Sam! BTW, I was up North visiting my daughter. Drove to Napa, Santa Rosa, Marin County back to Hayward.