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Raving With Happiness!

Here it comes, don't close your eyes, don't hold your breathe The climax of what we've all been waiting for! All your partners gather around You don't know them but you don't care Dancing is why everyones there! Don't hold back, don't try to fight, don't be afraid As the lazers fly, the flashing lights collide The floors light up as do you Arms raised and hearts alive Feelings racing and the DJ spacing! Lost emotions are swept away as you get carried away Don't stop, Keep it going!! Here we all go!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/30/2009 5:05:00 AM
Come on DJ,Lets have fun on the dance floor,,lovely poem raving with happiness to share--Charma
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Date: 11/19/2009 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Rene. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2009 9:24:00 AM
Nice one, it makes me wanna rave a little... lol... I still haven't gotten a hug from you yet... :( lol :))
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