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Raven's Cry

Raven's Cry

No more solitude no more pain.
Dry my tears that where in vain.
I hear the Raven's Cry, searching for
a soul that's mine.
No more solitude no more pain.
This world of mine will drive me insane.
Hear the Raven's Cry, searching for
The soul that's mine.
No where to run, no where to hide....
A sad little sigh the Raven's Cry.....
 


04/26/2014
Written by Gina montalbo

Copyright © Gina Montalbo | Year Posted 2014

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/16/2014 12:50:00 AM Let the Raven, show its own way. Gina, I like Andrea's comment about the good symbolic meaning of the Raven. If you noticed Edgar Allan Poe, hung around with a Raven, perhaps showing us that his soul belong. Your posm is awesome. Hugs...Linda Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 5/16/2014 11:04:00 PM Thank you linda.... I also like the comment.... Gina

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen Date: 5/3/2014 8:10:00 PM Beautiful. Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 5/11/2014 10:08:00 PM Thank you.... Gina

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/1/2014 11:59:00 PM the raven is a good symbol for pain or hopelessness. I like how you used the raven's cry in this heartfelt poem. Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 5/3/2014 10:41:00 AM Tank you Andrea.... Gina

Deborah Shiells Date: 4/30/2014 6:28:00 PM Hello Gina, So much expression here!! Great write Gina. Thanks so much for sharing this poem with us here. Peace, Deborah Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 5/3/2014 10:38:00 AM Thank you for the kind works..... Smiles.... Gina

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/26/2014 10:02:00 PM Oh Gina this is great!!!! Edgar Allen Poe would be jealous!!!!! Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/27/2014 11:25:00 AM Wow!!!!! Thank you i didn't think i had it in me...many smiles and hugs... Hina

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 4/26/2014 3:12:00 PM Very well crafted, very well done. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/26/2014 6:59:00 PM Thank you for your comment .... Lucilla

Kelly Deschler Date: 4/26/2014 1:50:00 PM I loved this. You write with great depth and soul. Very nicely done, Gina! :) Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/26/2014 2:47:00 PM Thank you for you kind words i think this is one of my best writes..... Smiles... Gina

Jerry T Curtis Date: 4/26/2014 6:29:00 AM Loved it Gina, it seems to me, in this world all tears are in vain. Ha Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/26/2014 2:44:00 PM True to that... But we have hope... Gina

Mel Merrill Date: 4/26/2014 1:06:00 AM Gina, I like this. Nicely penned; great imagery and theme! Oh, and congrats on moving up to third place on the new best poets list. I'm hanging on to one by my fingertips lol Hugs ;-) Mel Login to Reply Mel Merrill Date: 4/26/2014 2:43:00 AM I have been there awhile, but it's an effort. Very kind of you to read my poems--and all night no less lol I hope my poetry doesn't cause you sleep deprivation. Well, if there are people reading my stuff, I guess I'll keep on slingin the ink Peace ;-) Gina Montalbo Date: 4/26/2014 2:05:00 AM Lol... Are you sure of that ... You been holding on for while and my writes are kinda simple. Yours are awesome i love to read them at night so i can dream..... Lots of love..... Gina