Ravens


Amidst the storm, dark ravens fly,
Foreshadowing that someone will die,

Caw-caw they croak, watching us o'er,
It's us against them, and then no more.


05/01/19
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 2:53 PM
well done. You were one of the few to do two small stanzas, as I did. I think nobody else did the crows? Congrats for your win
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 12:46 PM
- Congratulations on your excellent winning poem, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 5, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Dark and deep... Nice on Jo..
May Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 10:15 AM
A dark write of the ravens caw...Congrats on your win Jo..
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