Raven Eyes

beware enchantment
the gaze of those raven eyes
stare into your soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 12:10 PM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Alana. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 10:10 AM
great haiku!
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January 10, 2009 at 6:44 PM
'Gaze' and 'raven' is neat assonance... well done Alana! Best wishes, Keith
Anos Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 7:32 PM
It reminded me of Poe's Nevermore hehehe! Morbid and refreshing Alana hehe! brgds. George
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