Raven Eyes

beware enchantment
the gaze of those raven eyes
stare into your soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/6/2012 12:10:00 PM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Alana. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2009 10:10:00 AM
great haiku!
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Date: 1/10/2009 6:44:00 PM
'Gaze' and 'raven' is neat assonance... well done Alana! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 10/4/2008 7:32:00 PM
It reminded me of Poe's Nevermore hehehe! Morbid and refreshing Alana hehe! brgds. George
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