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Raven

I see Raven has come to the graveyard To gloat on her Realm of the Dead Beautiful death bird Posture defiant Ready to expand on her soul cache Ready to do her bad deeds Poets and painters and musicians All lie there A treasure trove of sound, magic and line Michelangelo, John Donne and Da Vinci Joined by Milton and Shakespeare and Keats. She is greedy - our raven - a philistine She wants all that talent and genius To feed her own beauty - surreal To make her the Goddess of the Dead World Where she would be praised as it's queen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/17/2011 11:58:00 AM
Extraordinary write for Debbie's new contest Liz..good luck ..this is dynamic and dramatic.. feeling every lines..luv.. tops.. happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:14:00 PM
wonderful work Liz, deep and i love it. take care..luv~Skat
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:11:00 PM
Liz this is a vibrant passionate piece .. unique entry for the contest.. seeing Raven as this artistic seeker of yet still more beauty and fame... good luck in the contest luv.. and thankxx for your sweet comments today luv..
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:39:00 AM
a unique rendition of a theme, liz... beautiful use of personification... winning wishes for the contest.. just did one on raven too!:) huggs, nette
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