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Raven

black feathers take wing to a white moon on the rise ... there you are again 3/16/2022 (used howmanysyllables.com)

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Md Johnson

Date: 2/13/2023 6:31:00 AM

Fantastic image. -MDJ

Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/11/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thanks, MD

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/4/2022 8:48:00 PM

Love this, Kelly ~

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/10/2022 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Line

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2022 6:41:00 AM

Interesting work on the winners' list. Way to go and congrats. Sara

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/10/2022 10:50:00 AM

Thank you Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2022 9:36:00 PM

Great imagery, Kelly, congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest. Blessings my friend

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2022 10:18:00 AM

Thank you my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2022 9:20:00 PM

love love love this. Congrats for the win.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2022 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/28/2022 12:11:00 PM

Hauntingly beautiful Kelly, to mine faves, congrats! your line 3 twist is awesome, trademark of a fine 'ku

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2022 10:03:00 AM

Thank you so much James!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2022 9:23:00 PM

Beautiful poem with a tinge of color-contrast. Congratulations!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2022 9:56:00 AM

Thank you!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/27/2022 4:53:00 PM

Kelly, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/5/2022 5:04:00 PM

Thank you Tania ... I enjoyed writing for your contest :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/18/2022 11:09:00 AM

Nice job; love the mental image

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/5/2022 5:02:00 PM

Thank you J.T.