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Raul's Shards of Light

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                            Blinding, squinting sight
                              Kaleidoscope of colors
                                  Blurry sanity

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Gert W. Knop

May 12, 2010 at 8:51 AM

Please do permit me a note on Seinfield: We won't see this on TV here, but we got som other comedy series! It is also interesting to watch political cabaret on our TV...Gert

Gert W. Knop

May 12, 2010 at 8:49 AM

Nicely written Haiku, Doris! Loved kaleidoscopes when I was a child! And thank you for your friendly comments...Gert

Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2010 at 12:34 PM

tHIS ONE i DIG !!! Love them kaleiding shapes..Nice one,P.D.

Gareth James

April 11, 2010 at 2:28 AM

Lovely write, Doris. I love reading Haikus. It amazes me the varied detail

Charmaine Chircop

April 11, 2010 at 1:26 AM

Great great haiku.....Charma

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2010 at 10:38 PM

A different perspective, Doris. I enjoyed reading. And good luck in the contest. Luv, andrea (ps thanks for putting my name like you did by your poem title. It helps me not to see the poems that way by accident! thanks for your participation. Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

April 10, 2010 at 9:56 PM

This is as original as I believe I've seen for this one Doris. Good JOb and good luck. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 10, 2010 at 6:21 PM

Spectacular write Doris.. good luck in Raul's contest which has closed already..so fast are his contests... I live 30 minutes from our beach and its free so only need to pack a lunch ..take some drinks.. and sunscreen..laptop... for a great time... now its 42 degrees so the 90's have come and gone for April I'm sure.. thankxxx for your encouragement and support of my poetry..luv.. Linda-Marie..