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Raul's Shards of Light

. ~~~*~~~;;;~~~*~~~ Blinding, squinting sight Kaleidoscope of colors Blurry sanity . ~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/12/2010 8:51:00 AM

Please do permit me a note on Seinfield: We won't see this on TV here, but we got som other comedy series! It is also interesting to watch political cabaret on our TV...Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/12/2010 8:49:00 AM

Nicely written Haiku, Doris! Loved kaleidoscopes when I was a child! And thank you for your friendly comments...Gert

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2010 12:34:00 PM

tHIS ONE i DIG !!! Love them kaleiding shapes..Nice one,P.D.

Gareth James

Date: 4/11/2010 2:28:00 AM

Lovely write, Doris. I love reading Haikus. It amazes me the varied detail

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/11/2010 1:26:00 AM

Great great haiku.....Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2010 10:38:00 PM

A different perspective, Doris. I enjoyed reading. And good luck in the contest. Luv, andrea (ps thanks for putting my name like you did by your poem title. It helps me not to see the poems that way by accident! thanks for your participation. Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2010 9:56:00 PM

This is as original as I believe I've seen for this one Doris. Good JOb and good luck. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2010 6:21:00 PM

Spectacular write Doris.. good luck in Raul's contest which has closed already..so fast are his contests... I live 30 minutes from our beach and its free so only need to pack a lunch ..take some drinks.. and sunscreen..laptop... for a great time... now its 42 degrees so the 90's have come and gone for April I'm sure.. thankxxx for your encouragement and support of my poetry..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/10/2010 10:20:00 AM

very nice good luck in the conteset and thank you for your always sweet comments faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/10/2010 9:07:00 AM

Winner's circle material..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/10/2010 8:12:00 AM

looks like a winner to me loved the imagery in this one thanks for sharing and gl in contest I still have to do mine now keep up the great work