Rats

we made love jumped ship rats ©RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY December 09, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2014 4:04:00 PM

You are so unique , Rajat. Cool one!!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/10/2014 4:32:00 AM

I am blessed my dear Andrea. Hugs!XXXX rajat

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/9/2014 11:02:00 AM

Rajat, It's 3 degrees "C" here now in Germany (where we live at)!! Best!! Gary

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/9/2014 6:05:00 AM

Hello Rajat My Great Friend!! You always amaze me Sir with the way you capsulize a metaphor or a statement or even a phrase itself is so few words. The simplicity of "Rats" makes its six words of prose even more compelling. A "7" from me on your write!! Continued best wishes to you and your family from me and Ingrid!! Gary

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/9/2014 8:12:00 AM

MY BEST WISHES TO YOU INGRID AND ALL LOVED ONES. WISH YOU A HAPPY CHRISTMAS. HERE MERCURY IS 20 degree C. What's in Schoeningen?

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/9/2014 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Gary. Love XXX rajat