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Rats

we made love
                                                jumped ship
                                                      rats       









                                   ©RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
                                          December 09, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2014 at 4:04 PM

You are so unique , Rajat. Cool one!!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 10, 2014 at 4:32 AM

I am blessed my dear Andrea. Hugs!XXXX rajat

Gary Bateman

December 9, 2014 at 11:02 AM

Rajat, It's 3 degrees "C" here now in Germany (where we live at)!! Best!! Gary

Gary Bateman

December 9, 2014 at 6:05 AM

Hello Rajat My Great Friend!! You always amaze me Sir with the way you capsulize a metaphor or a statement or even a phrase itself is so few words. The simplicity of "Rats" makes its six words of prose even more compelling. A "7" from me on your write!! Continued best wishes to you and your family from me and Ingrid!! Gary

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 9, 2014 at 8:12 AM

MY BEST WISHES TO YOU INGRID AND ALL LOVED ONES. WISH YOU A HAPPY CHRISTMAS. HERE MERCURY IS 20 degree C. What's in Schoeningen?

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 9, 2014 at 8:08 AM

Thank you Gary. Love XXX rajat