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Raspberry Picking

I smelled the fruit as I closed in on my prey My arms would be all scratched up by end of day But raspberries are awesome – fruity and pure. Thorns tore me up, but it was worth it for sure.

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Date: 3/8/2023 11:00:00 PM
for sure, it worth it, love that fruit and the fine penning too yann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/9/2023 8:03:00 PM
I love raspberries even if I get scratched to smithereens.

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