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Rare and True Won'T Leave Me Blue

A fire to snuggle with As we share a passioned kiss Holding each other and keep Wrapped up tight and fall asleep Waking up with a huge smile I've been wearing for a while Since I found the greatest person That saved me from all the hurtin' I've felt through the many years Every day crying sad tears Never knowing I could be This secure and so happy I never want to go back Now my hearts on the right track That leads me home every night To someone who treats me right From the time we wake up till We cuddle so close and still As our hearts beat out together I could stay this way forever Not one day from you I've heard Any harsh and hurtful words Just the sweetest kindest phrases That soaks in and always tazes Me with a soft fluffy feel I'm about to fall and keel Over from my weakened knees Every day I'm asking please Let this go on and not stop I like the way I flip flop From a girl giving up hope At the end of my love rope To a girl who now insists She's never going to miss A single moment with you Surprises and something new Will be shown by me because This rare kind of tender love Is so very hard to find You will never leave my mind Thoughts of every day and hour This loves sweet and will not sour

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Date: 12/20/2013 6:01:00 AM
I agree with Kelly: you certainly have no difficulties expressing your passion, love, care and concern; they come through loud and clear in all your pieces. Another gem you've penned, Sweet Pea <3
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Date: 12/11/2013 2:36:00 PM
I can definitely feel your passion for this person coming through in these lines. You are very good at expressing your feelings in a poetic way. Great flow and rhyme, as always! Terrific work, Robin!...Thank you very much for the heartfelt comments on my "Dead Of Winter" poem!
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