Rapture

gossamer eyelids
fixed lifeless by vain rapture
see what I have done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 7:04 AM
You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great
Allison Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:41 AM
sounds like you have had botox done! lovely haiku you excel at this form:-) Hugs Jan xx
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