Rapture

white light, blessed bliss
one light, tepid kiss
although your eyes are the prize,
it's those ruby lips i'll miss

rapt 'round in rapture
my heart you capture
your visage, casts vast visions,
of which, outlasts my stature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Nice alliteration! Lovely poem!
Freie Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Thanks Baby Sister, I spend so much time writing poems meant to inspire laughs, that sometimes I like to inspire sighs. Thanks for the sweet something in my ear.
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