Angela Crabtree Poet Couplet

Rapture

Tis merriment I feel on this night
as a songbird that's taken flight

I relish such a warm fuzzy feeling
as it sends my mind for to reeling

the Rapture does come with bows and
I am the elect one of the 144,000

and I'll leave the earthly realm behind
til the right moment is to be defined

the modern Earth will be for our pleasure
perhaps Atlantis and all it's treasure

then we'll rule in Heaven evermore
after the dragon is then slain in war

peace and love will soon be prevalent
and winning battles will be irrelevant

you shall spot me as the gazing fawns
for I'll serve here til that day dawns

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Paul Callus December 1, 2020 at 5:41 AM Rapture will come to all those who merit it by their good life and deeds. I believe in an after life....and eternal happiness. ~ Regards // paul Angela Crabtree December 1, 2020 at 6:43 PM Thank you, Paul :)

Victor Buhagiar October 24, 2020 at 1:15 AM Loved your poem, so I read it again. The Book of Revelations is written in so mystic inspiration that it is difficult to understand. Only one thing is important. In the end Jesus is the winner. ~~ Angela Crabtree October 24, 2020 at 3:21 PM Thank you, Victor. Yes, Jesus is the winner in the end. :)

Gershon Wolf October 19, 2020 at 5:19 PM You're the best of 'the lot,' Angie! (144 is 'a lot' of eggs or whatever). Smiles, Gershon Angela Crabtree October 19, 2020 at 7:33 PM I try :)

Caren Krutsinger October 19, 2020 at 1:26 PM "the modern Earth will be for our pleasure perhaps Atlantis and all it's treasure" - this part delights me. Angela Crabtree October 19, 2020 at 3:59 PM :)

Victor Buhagiar October 19, 2020 at 1:04 AM Much to think about. But I believe Heaven is open to all who want it. ~~ Angela Crabtree October 19, 2020 at 8:24 AM Thank you for reading, Victor. I always appreciate your comments on my poems. There's a lot of controversy about the Book of Revelations. I also believe that Heaven is open to all. The 144,000 is supposedly the first to go. :)

Vijay Pandit October 18, 2020 at 1:15 PM Pondering into the heavenly and unknown--your imagination reaches for peace and love. Intriguing write, Angela. Angela Crabtree October 18, 2020 at 3:10 PM Thank you, Vijay. :)