Raptor Hiku X 2
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NOTE:HIKU is any English language variation on the Japanese haiku
RAPTOR
sparrow hawk alights-
the chattering
stops
just one flap of wings-
the raptor makes its kill
pouncing down at will
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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