Sabrina Brisson Poet Rhyme

Rapped Heart

You ripped my heart out
You used it as a cushion without consideration

You ripped my heart out
You left me in despair without a care

You ripped my heart out
You used it to keep yourself occupied and took me for a joyride

You ripped my heart out
You left be wondering about this ambivalent relationship, something I could 
never grip

You ripped my heart out
You used my hopes from the get-go, made it seem like such a natural flow

You ripped my heart out
You left me with anger, doubt, sadness, hurt something I can't construe as 
you left me the way 
that I had found you

You might as well of ripped my heart out - you wore it out

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David Smith May 9, 2020 at 9:08 PM A poem coming from a place of darkness into a place of light where healing may yet take place and give readers a chance to look inside their own hearts. You judged the weight of your words well and got the length right too. Best regards David in NZ Sabrina Brisson May 9, 2020 at 9:42 PM Thank you for the kind comment. I appreciate it.

Poet Destroyer A August 14, 2014 at 10:31 PM Sabrina, :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA

Carol Eastman January 11, 2012 at 8:33 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup. Keep writting. Sooo much anger in this one... Try one of our member contests. I think you'll like them.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2012 at 2:31 PM Sabrina it a lovely poem,touching. Welcome in P.Soup Sabrina!!! :)oxox love from Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown January 10, 2012 at 5:29 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sabrina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Krystal Cochrane January 9, 2012 at 11:58 AM This is so well written, I can totally feel the emotion behind it. This is my favourite part: "You left me with anger, doubt, sadness, hurt something I can't construe as you left me the way that I had found you."