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Rapped Heart

You ripped my heart out You used it as a cushion without consideration You ripped my heart out You left me in despair without a care You ripped my heart out You used it to keep yourself occupied and took me for a joyride You ripped my heart out You left be wondering about this ambivalent relationship, something I could never grip You ripped my heart out You used my hopes from the get-go, made it seem like such a natural flow You ripped my heart out You left me with anger, doubt, sadness, hurt something I can't construe as you left me the way that I had found you You might as well of ripped my heart out - you wore it out

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David Smith

Date: 5/9/2020 9:08:00 PM

A poem coming from a place of darkness into a place of light where healing may yet take place and give readers a chance to look inside their own hearts. You judged the weight of your words well and got the length right too. Best regards David in NZ

Sabrina Brisson
Date: 5/9/2020 9:42:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comment. I appreciate it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2014 10:31:00 PM

Sabrina, :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/11/2012 8:33:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. Keep writting. Sooo much anger in this one... Try one of our member contests. I think you'll like them.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/10/2012 2:31:00 PM

Sabrina it a lovely poem,touching. Welcome in P.Soup Sabrina!!! :)oxox love from Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/10/2012 5:29:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sabrina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Krystal Cochrane

Date: 1/9/2012 11:58:00 AM

This is so well written, I can totally feel the emotion behind it. This is my favourite part: "You left me with anger, doubt, sadness, hurt something I can't construe as you left me the way that I had found you."