Rapids Rose

A river runs
And rapids rose washing debris
Lawn's raking done

raintristich

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Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2017 at 5:38 PM

very nice, Sara. Let me see at least one more of this form.

Paul Callus

January 5, 2017 at 11:48 AM

I like the image you present, Sara, and that last line is really good! I'll have to look up Trilinea, first time I heard of it. Regards // paul

John Beam

January 5, 2017 at 6:20 AM

Thanks for sharing, Sara. I can't remember if I studied, this form before but I like and I will now.

Sara Kendrick

January 5, 2017 at 6:27 AM

Yeah, I have introduced you to a new form..I hope that you try to write a few..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Sara Kendrick

January 5, 2017 at 6:11 AM

The Trilinea, one more haiku copycat from Berg‘s Pathways for a Poet, created by Nellie Amos.. The defining feature is the word “rose” must appear somewhere in the 3 lines. The Trilinea is: a tristich, a poem in 3 lines. syllabic, with syllable count per line, 4/8/4. rhymed, L1 and L3 rhyme. composed to include the word “rose

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