Mick Talbot Poet Rhyme

Rapid Rhyme

RAPID RHYME

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rapid rhyme
running out of time
spring raving
goodbye, winter waving
all flora seeking
above ground peeking
spring warmth dependent
on the sun resplendent
rapid rhyme
Jenny Wren sings in time
flies busy
bees dizzy
early cherry bloomed
every branch festooned
spring now weeves
hiding summer up her sleeves
springs raved waiting for a cuckoo
made do with a doves coo coo
rapid now near out of rhyme
woot woot its summertime

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3/12/18

'Quick Fire Rapid Rhyme Poetry Contest, sponsored by Brenda Chiri

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Anisha Dutta March 13, 2018 at 12:26 PM AWESOME. Enjoyed every line. Too Good. best Wishes Mick Talbot March 13, 2018 at 1:29 PM Anisha, Many thanks on both counts, fingers crossed... Mick

Susan Ashley March 12, 2018 at 10:00 PM Woot woot I love this Mick! Your imagery is amazing and your last line is completely awesome - and got me smiling :)) Love it! Best wishes for a win!! Susan Ashley March 13, 2018 at 5:26 PM I thought it was pretty funny! :)) I've done the same thing Mick, woot woot!! Mick Talbot March 13, 2018 at 1:27 PM Sorry Susan, put my jokink inkwell away. Red faced I am :0) Susan Ashley March 13, 2018 at 9:08 AM you're welcome, Mark, ;) woot woot lol! Mick Talbot March 13, 2018 at 8:56 AM Woot, woot to that, thanks Susan... Mick (Sorry, put my jokink inkwell away. Red faced I am) :0)

Tom Cunningham March 12, 2018 at 4:18 PM You done this well mick, you seem to tackle every form with ease. Good luck in the contest. Tom Mick Talbot March 13, 2018 at 8:55 AM Haha, I wish, some forms are a real challenge. My thanks on both counts... Mick