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Rapid Rhyme

RAPID RHYME ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ rapid rhyme running out of time spring raving goodbye, winter waving all flora seeking above ground peeking spring warmth dependent on the sun resplendent rapid rhyme Jenny Wren sings in time flies busy bees dizzy early cherry bloomed every branch festooned spring now weeves hiding summer up her sleeves springs raved waiting for a cuckoo made do with a doves coo coo rapid now near out of rhyme woot woot its summertime ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 3/12/18 'Quick Fire Rapid Rhyme Poetry Contest, sponsored by Brenda Chiri

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/13/2018 12:26:00 PM

AWESOME. Enjoyed every line. Too Good. best Wishes

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/13/2018 1:29:00 PM

Anisha, Many thanks on both counts, fingers crossed... Mick

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/12/2018 10:00:00 PM

Woot woot I love this Mick! Your imagery is amazing and your last line is completely awesome - and got me smiling :)) Love it! Best wishes for a win!!

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/13/2018 5:26:00 PM

I thought it was pretty funny! :)) I've done the same thing Mick, woot woot!!

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/13/2018 1:27:00 PM

Sorry Susan, put my jokink inkwell away. Red faced I am :0)

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/13/2018 9:08:00 AM

you're welcome, Mark, ;) woot woot lol!

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/13/2018 8:56:00 AM

Woot, woot to that, thanks Susan... Mick (Sorry, put my jokink inkwell away. Red faced I am) :0)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2018 4:18:00 PM

You done this well mick, you seem to tackle every form with ease. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/13/2018 8:55:00 AM

Haha, I wish, some forms are a real challenge. My thanks on both counts... Mick