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Ranting and Rating

you can see
a man's nipple
on a movie screen

i can jog
topless but
don't because

of my
belly but
believe you

me
i could
expose my

teat even though
the definition makes
the discussion to say a

female
but who
wrote the

dic
tion
ary

beware of those
who cast the
first stone

and if i'm 
outside of
a glass house

i can see
every
one's

mammaries

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 11/6/2019 11:45:00 AM

A wonderful raving. I love it. Especially that ending.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/6/2019 2:27:00 PM

Lol it was a rant and a RATING lol Thanks Maureen. I want you to know that you were the first person on this site to read and comment on my stuff, and you have me great advice to boot. If you look back at my beginnings this past February I titled everything "impromptu". You read one of mine and commented, which gave me a sense of confidence; but you also said that I should title my poems. I think since then, some 900 poems later, almost every one of them but a few has a title. I can't thank you enough for all of your support; plus I started reading yours and was blown away. I can't thank you enough Maureen!!!!!!!