Ransac

I knew I'd find it somewhere along though,
My lonly trails I follow the dark past
"This wasn't the right way," was said I know.
To turn around, truly you would not last.

But to hear is to see and truth believe,
the love i shine, benonthed love to be.
Belittled and scared, was put off, naive
But shined with strength was to be me.

So I stood by you. Innered my true faults.
Finding myself: An inhuman caress.
Hiding away in the midst' of a fault.
Belittling myself to less than less.

Through all this I learned to be as me.
Through all this how i really should so be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/30/2010 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your seventh place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations Kristen on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Kristen
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations Kristen on your poem's honored placement in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:56:00 PM
Congrats Kristen on your big win in Moses contest with this excellent entry .. enjoy sweet success and victory tonight with luv..
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