Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

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Rangy, Scorching, and Filthy

Golden waves sway in a strange sky to create a new shade.
With bare feet, cross a shroud's path, but no one is aware.
Summer starts as scarlet hues salute a mottled promenade.
This image has gold sparkle and blue padded birds there.



Written: August 14, 2021

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Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2021 at 2:45 PM I want to see those birds you describe. Sounds like a very lovely place! Sotto Poet August 16, 2021 at 4:23 PM Thank you very much for your kind words, Andrea, and in response to your inquiry, the birds do not exist on this planet; they are birds from heaven. Best wishes and hugs.

Victor Buhagiar August 15, 2021 at 1:37 AM There is depth in this short but lovely poem. Sotto Poet August 15, 2021 at 9:08 AM Thank you very much, VICTOR, appreciate your kind comment

L Milton Hankins August 14, 2021 at 5:52 PM Beautiful lines with exquisite rhymes and imagery which, of course, makes for a poem worth reading and meditating on. Nice work, Lasaad. Sotto Poet August 14, 2021 at 8:07 PM Thank you so much, Milton. I appreciate your kindness and your profound thoughts. Have a safe and blessed weekend.

Delice Arleen Skelly August 14, 2021 at 5:35 PM Intriguing images Lasaad...Delice Sotto Poet August 14, 2021 at 8:08 PM Thanks, Delice, for your nice feedback

Vijay Pandit August 14, 2021 at 1:17 PM Gold sparkles through your imagery, Lasaad. Wonderful imagery. Sotto Poet August 14, 2021 at 8:09 PM Thank you so much, Vijay. I appreciate your kindness and your profound thoughts. Have a safe and blessed weekend.