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Rangy, Scorching, and Filthy

Golden waves sway in a strange sky to create a new shade.
With bare feet, cross a shroud's path, but no one is aware.
Summer starts as scarlet hues salute a mottled promenade.
This image has gold sparkle and blue padded birds there.



Written: August 14, 2021

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/16/2021 2:45:00 PM I want to see those birds you describe. Sounds like a very lovely place! Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/16/2021 4:23:00 PM Thank you very much for your kind words, Andrea, and in response to your inquiry, the birds do not exist on this planet; they are birds from heaven. Best wishes and hugs.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/15/2021 1:37:00 AM There is depth in this short but lovely poem. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/15/2021 9:08:00 AM Thank you very much, VICTOR, appreciate your kind comment

L Milton Hankins Date: 8/14/2021 5:52:00 PM Beautiful lines with exquisite rhymes and imagery which, of course, makes for a poem worth reading and meditating on. Nice work, Lasaad. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/14/2021 8:07:00 PM Thank you so much, Milton. I appreciate your kindness and your profound thoughts. Have a safe and blessed weekend.

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 8/14/2021 5:35:00 PM Intriguing images Lasaad...Delice Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/14/2021 8:08:00 PM Thanks, Delice, for your nice feedback

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/14/2021 1:17:00 PM Gold sparkles through your imagery, Lasaad. Wonderful imagery. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/14/2021 8:09:00 PM Thank you so much, Vijay. I appreciate your kindness and your profound thoughts. Have a safe and blessed weekend.