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Golden waves sway in a strange sky to create a new shade. With bare feet, cross a shroud's path, but no one is aware. Summer starts as scarlet hues salute a mottled promenade. This image has gold sparkle and blue padded birds there.
Written: August 14, 2021

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Date: 8/16/2021 2:45:00 PM
I want to see those birds you describe. Sounds like a very lovely place!
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Date: 8/16/2021 4:23:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Andrea, and in response to your inquiry, the birds do not exist on this planet; they are birds from heaven. Best wishes and hugs.
Date: 8/15/2021 1:37:00 AM
There is depth in this short but lovely poem.
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Date: 8/15/2021 9:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, VICTOR, appreciate your kind comment
Date: 8/14/2021 5:52:00 PM
Beautiful lines with exquisite rhymes and imagery which, of course, makes for a poem worth reading and meditating on. Nice work, Lasaad.
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Date: 8/14/2021 8:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Milton. I appreciate your kindness and your profound thoughts. Have a safe and blessed weekend.
Date: 8/14/2021 5:35:00 PM
Intriguing images Lasaad...Delice
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Date: 8/14/2021 8:08:00 PM
Thanks, Delice, for your nice feedback
Date: 8/14/2021 1:17:00 PM
Gold sparkles through your imagery, Lasaad. Wonderful imagery.
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Date: 8/14/2021 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. I appreciate your kindness and your profound thoughts. Have a safe and blessed weekend.

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