Randomling 24: Untitled

eternity
a mosaic assembled from
shimmering, glimmering
tiles of delight and
black-glazed stones of despair
interlocking snowflakes
in seamless beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gifford Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 11:38 AM
It's interesting to see what your visual eternity is to you, Mary. I especially liked how you closed the poem with your beautiful snowflakes. Yours in poetry, ~~Darlene
Rotman Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 9:14 PM
Thanks, Darlene
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