Random Thoughts *9* My Shape

*Shape Poetry*			      



                                          I
                                      am the
				   strong, dark
				        man
				          in
		     my sometimes** life like dreams.
                  sh           adows darken. It's        me.
		 the           dream is this figu           re*
		you s        ee, in this poem y         ou* r
		 ead.         can't tell what colo         r sh
	          irt,           casual gear, or pro        fes
    	           S              al suit. no hat,              J
                  I O             a dark being,              U S
                   N                  i know it                  T
                                         is me.
                                 In this dream there
                                    are three of me, 
                            all dark but          distinctive
                             personali             ties. I se
                              e. they r             epresent
                              my multi             ple perso
                               nalities.               do you 
			          see		            me?
                       I am the third             I think. no I 
                           m them all,             a savvy 1



withheld Until contest is over
9/8/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 7:01 AM
Hey there brave one WHAT a complicated shape. I have some help for your shape in SOUP MAIL! Thanks for enterying the contest! Light and love
Strand Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 2:29 AM
Very original Jared.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Canady Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 8:12 PM
Brilliant, Absolutely Brilliant... A Poem and A Picture and The Meaning Explained... Very, Very Nice... MoonBee
Chircop Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 5:24 PM
professional suit,just a shirt or casual gear,impressed by the three,mr profs in shirt and jeans,what do you think,mega mix?:)all personalities forming one..Jared Pickett Asavvy1--love the way you ve created this human man:)going to my favs cos its different,original--Charma
Freeman Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 9:08 PM
You are "The Words" I just can't think of the words, to say you, tho, Lol, God bless, you?you? you? you??????????????? Anyhow, Sincerely, Moses
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September 8, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Artistic poem! It must have taken a lot of planning to work it all out. Keep on writing! Karen
Moreno Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 2:54 PM
Nice shape Jared...Raul
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 12:23 PM
Love the shape. Hard work time spent. Sara
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