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Random Thoughts *9* My Shape

*Shape Poetry* I am the strong, dark man in my sometimes** life like dreams. sh adows darken. It's me. the dream is this figu re* you s ee, in this poem y ou* r ead. can't tell what colo r sh irt, casual gear, or pro fes S al suit. no hat, J I O a dark being, U S N i know it T is me. In this dream there are three of me, all dark but distinctive personali ties. I se e. they r epresent my multi ple perso nalities. do you see me? I am the third I think. no I m them all, a savvy 1 withheld Until contest is over 9/8/09

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Date: 11/14/2009 7:01:00 AM
Hey there brave one WHAT a complicated shape. I have some help for your shape in SOUP MAIL! Thanks for enterying the contest! Light and love
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Date: 9/22/2009 2:29:00 AM
Very original Jared.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 9/21/2009 8:12:00 PM
Brilliant, Absolutely Brilliant... A Poem and A Picture and The Meaning Explained... Very, Very Nice... MoonBee
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Date: 9/18/2009 5:24:00 PM
professional suit,just a shirt or casual gear,impressed by the three,mr profs in shirt and jeans,what do you think,mega mix?:)all personalities forming one..Jared Pickett Asavvy1--love the way you ve created this human man:)going to my favs cos its different,original--Charma
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:08:00 PM
You are "The Words" I just can't think of the words, to say you, tho, Lol, God bless, you?you? you? you??????????????? Anyhow, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/8/2009 4:33:00 PM
Artistic poem! It must have taken a lot of planning to work it all out. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:54:00 PM
Nice shape Jared...Raul
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:23:00 PM
Love the shape. Hard work time spent. Sara
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