Jared Pickett Poet I do not know?

Random Thoughts *47* Trois Par Huit

Trois Par Huit
AAB BB BCC
3,6,9,12,12,9,6,3

Workout

muscle bound
gaining pound after pound
triceps, biceps, lats, a cut up back.

Push ups, sit ups, crunches to create a six pack,
tuna fish, chicken, fruits and veggies for a snack.

Summer is here, I can't do without 
Bronze body tan, so devout.
This work-out.


Jared Pickett
5/12/2010
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Derrick Burton May 15, 2010 at 9:41 AM wow, good luck with that looks like who ever they are gonna really need alot of disapline making sure they stay disaplined. Enjoy your weekend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 13, 2010 at 4:03 PM SOUP MAIL SWEETNESS ...LUV...

Charmaine Chircop May 13, 2010 at 2:34 AM Is that you eating chocolate and cake,Is that your head peeping in the fridge. .got you. .twenty extra sit ups for that. :) Sweet poem. .and I'm impressed how many forms you know,i never tried this. .I need to study some more forms,I'm lazy at it . .Charma

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2010 at 12:23 PM Great pace in this motivational poem, Jared. After reading it, I feel like putting all desserts on hold. Swim suit season has already arrived in Florida and though working out feels like beating a dead horse, I don't want to look like one while tanning on the beach. Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn

Brittany Moon May 12, 2010 at 9:04 AM Thnx for your comments on my poems...may we both be blessed from this poetrysite...~Brittany~

Brittany Moon May 12, 2010 at 9:03 AM Interesting...Keep up the good work..God Bless...~Brittany~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 12, 2010 at 8:42 AM Thankxxx honey ..we all inspire each other.. in this case .. a man automatically knew what would spark the "Sweetheart's" interest ..so kudos to u my friend.. thankxxx. luv..

May 12, 2010 at 8:33 AM Mr. JP, you left out the "sweat" part but I can read between the lines. Do it!!! Scarlett

Poet Destroyer A May 12, 2010 at 8:29 AM What ever the form it is well thought out, you my friend just invented your own form,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 12, 2010 at 8:14 AM To the victor comes the spoils.. ever hear that saying before.. u put in the time to get a lean machine body and it pays off as u strut your stuff in the Summer ... just luv the way u wrote it .. u may start a new trend on Soup ... I just posted my new Sestina .. The Break Up .. would u mind reading since u get kudos at the end..thankxxx.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"