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Random Thoughts *43* Double Acrostic

Fondling to a rhythmic caress. I'm Obliged as I Undress you.>> exposing your beautiful, Radiant body. Pheromone perfume stimulates my Loins and brings forth this Animalistic fury within me. I Yearn for all of you. Jared Pickett 02/25/2010 Asavvy1

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Date: 3/8/2010 4:32:00 AM
Longing for more...... is the state of mind this sexy write put me in Jared. I totally loved reading it. Awesome
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:26:00 AM
Longing for more...... is the state of mind this sexy write. I totally loved reading it. Awesome
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Date: 3/1/2010 7:29:00 AM
Wow, you didn't waste any attempt there! Message received loud and clear -well done! Thanks for dropping by with all the lovely comments! Kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 2/27/2010 4:49:00 AM
Thinks for the encouragement my friend. Your poetry has a rhythm I really like. Anyway hopefully being here will improve me. Perhaps get me past the teen angst poetry stage... Ciao for now
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Date: 2/26/2010 5:39:00 PM
A hot little number this. ( Just a random thought:) :) glad you liked my 'Whalers' thank you... cheers Margaret
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Date: 2/26/2010 4:35:00 PM
soupmail..Jared...JB
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Date: 2/26/2010 3:57:00 PM
Since u are racing up the charts on community builders on site.. maybe u will want to comment on my newest post ..Soliloquy of Love... think u might like.. anyway it will add another notch to your poetry belt.. and isn't that what counts on here? my sweet... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/26/2010 11:53:00 AM
Hey cool dude...I meant Delaware not Wisconsin....a million apologies!!!!!!!!!!! Marty
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Date: 2/26/2010 10:51:00 AM
Hey Jared I tagged you to be next...Hope you don't mind...Enjoy all your poems..Marty
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Date: 2/26/2010 7:04:00 AM
wowwww..passion ,pure passion..deep..Charma
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Date: 2/26/2010 3:14:00 AM
Cleverrrrr , JP , very clever .....
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Date: 2/26/2010 12:44:00 AM
Interesting acrostic JP.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & observations today.
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:46:00 PM
Sensual write, Jared...So much yearning going on here today!LOL Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/25/2010 7:35:00 PM
Perfect seduction scenario.. intense and passionate... excellent write tonight Jared.. luv.. "Sweetheart" thankxx for your comment on my recent blog.. appreciated .. like getting to know each poet on a personal level building friendships...thankxxx.. luv..
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Date: 2/25/2010 1:25:00 PM
I used some Pheromone cologne for men and I ain't gonna tell you what happened....lol enjoyed your poem....Marty
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Date: 2/25/2010 1:22:00 PM
You can make a person hungry for many things :-). Glad you liked my poems. Thanks for you comments. I love bread with cheese too and garlic. I have several poems under food you might enjoy. Also check out Body Clash. Ellen
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:17:00 PM
Hot exotic poem here Jared !!!!!! Yet, nothing personal...but if I can't smell that sylphs flesh...well....great poem Jared ! *smiles* james
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:05:00 PM
How often do you have these random thoughts? Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:56:00 AM
Lust. lust and more lust & passion ............love it...Allie
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:36:00 AM
sexy
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:44:00 AM
I wear Chanel no. 5 :) and it has some impact :) He, he, he!!! Parlez vous francais? Paris...oh...the city of romance...Some "random thoughts" you have, Jared. Nicely composed, my friend! All the best, Iolanda
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:37:00 AM
Very intnse reading ..I loved it ..I wish my man held the same passion you do..Very exciting..a friend IRMA
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:31:00 AM
Passionate! Women long to have such an impact on the men they love. Maybe I need to pick up some "Pheromone perfume." LOL Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn
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