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Random Thoughts *42* Monotetra 2

I woke today, my heart was sore from what took place the day before. My wife said she could stand no more. Depression soars, depression soars We'd been together fifteen years. Anniversary drawing near. her suffering I could not hear, to wipe her tears, to wipe her tears. She told me she fell out of love because my career came above. Now finally she'd had enough, it's getting rough, it's getting rough. I can't believe I could not see, my beautiful bride leaving me. My legs gave out, dropped to my knees and tried to plea, I tried to plea. Jared Pickett 12/17/2006 Asavvy1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 9:40:00 AM
Hey Jared...thanks for commenting!!!! are you up for a chat?
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:30:00 PM
Hey Jared.. appreciate your comments on my blog today.. getting to know each poet personally to build on friendships.. thankxxx...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/24/2010 2:36:00 PM
Don't wait to strike when the iron is hot, MAKE IT HOT BY STRIKING! Act upon your thoughts my friend, love Simone
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Date: 2/24/2010 9:26:00 AM
thanks i hope you make the right decision for me prayer and patiently waite for what i hope for friend
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Date: 2/23/2010 12:48:00 PM
Great seeing u on Soup ..again .. and again.. luv all your comments today on my poetry.. made me laugh and I surely needed that .. instead of all that applause..how about a big bear hug...?? my "honey" just left after 4 days of February Frolicing and my emotions are bummed now... keep me smiling yes? .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/23/2010 8:26:00 AM
Jared I hope she listens , sad but so well put Tops Daniel
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Date: 2/23/2010 8:04:00 AM
Thanks for your comments today, heart wrenching poem, you are good.
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:57:00 PM
Is this true, Jared? Gosh, i Hope not. Anyway, good mono rhyming in those quatrains. Hope you are well! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/22/2010 6:07:00 AM
Hope that this is a topic and not your real life. If it is real life maybe there is hope. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Bowling Competition". No the write was not about bowling but a thunderstorm. My dog has to have prozac when there is a storm...just joshing but he is terrified. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2010 4:29:00 PM
Sometimes pleading is in vain.. but your poem is full of pain.. still a great write from one who is not yet hitched... great flow of your words Lone Wolf...still on the prowl? luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/21/2010 3:40:00 PM
Ow that is so sad Jared:)your wife leaving you..I can imagine you peeling onions trying to cry some tears out..Tell her to file for divorce ,hurry,life is too short,penty of blondes in the sea..lol:)Great poem,so nice and fun to read you-Charma
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