Random Thoughts *41* Monotetra

I looked inside her wanting eyes
and knew that she was solely mine.
This brown haired beauty just my size
I am her guy, I am her guy

I met her at a shopping mall,
She looked just like a barbie doll.
Standing five foot six inches tall,
I gave my all, I gave my all.

Ate at a four star restaurant,
A night-cap at the coffee shop.
I kissed her then she made me stop,
she wants to talk, she wants to talk.

A couple for a while now.
She made me shave my uni-brow.
My afro too, it made me frown
my head bowed down, my head bowed down..

Jared Pickett
12/27/2006
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Oh, my, I'm sorry, but this one made me laugh, shaving your unibrow(why would you want only one brow anyway?) haha and the last part, I could just picture you bowing your head yes, dear, yes dear. I really LIKE this one. All about how a person can rob you of your essence! Great poem! andrea
Strand Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 11:59 PM
Thank you for your always welcome comments JP Rgds Brian
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Sounds like some of the happiness left when demands were made. Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Cheeseman Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 8:29 AM
So enjoyed this Jared, am liking your work friend, Daniel
Culverhouse Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 8:06 AM
Barbie's got to have a clean shaven ken to perfection, LOL enjoyed reading too
Palli Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:52 AM
So nice to compromise
Chircop Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Lovely love poem..full of sweetness.Charma
Sweetheart Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Posting new photos of the "new u"?? this was a cool write Mr. J... the perfect scenario for LUV... luv.. "Sweetheart"..
Marggraf Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 3:18 PM
good love poem
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