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Random Thoughts 38 Double Sided Acrostic

--Wallpaper portrait of lake effect snoW --Icy conditions, back spasms cripple. I -sNiffle. goose pimples, brail on my skiN --Thin sheets of black ice line my streeT --Erratic winds shoot ice shrapnel, I fleE --Retreat, for the comfort of my reclineR Jared Pickett 2/10/2010 Asavvy1

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Susan Mills

Date: 2/24/2010 1:08:00 PM

clever poem and nice retreat to read! Thanks for your comment on my poem! -Susan Mills

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/23/2010 11:36:00 AM

sounds good, my recliner died on me, now I just have a straight back chair. In better days... thanks for your comments!! thanks again for the inspiration.

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 2/23/2010 9:19:00 AM

I like the flow, very neatly and well done, I'm cold too!!! :)

Larry Belt

Date: 2/19/2010 2:34:00 AM

Very impressive, my friend.....This one took alot of skill.......Larry

Brian Strand

Date: 2/17/2010 1:25:00 AM

Very clever poetry in this difficult form Jared.Rgds

Wilfordj Yelverton

Date: 2/14/2010 7:18:00 AM

I this one bro, keep it going, once i find a book on the different styles I'll catch up!! Your boy Wilfordjy.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/13/2010 12:00:00 PM

SUPER DE DUPER! lol Coolio poem, Jared. I'm going to try one of those...Loved you blog, too. Smiling, Dane Ann

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/12/2010 6:25:00 PM

LOL! Very good one. Nice double acrostic to winter. I particularly like the first word of the 3rd line. Fun read, my friend. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments on my poem. Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/11/2010 11:12:00 PM

Here's a pair of gloves Jared,a woolen scarf too:)I miss the icy Snow Jared,i had too much of my sun..so as it seems grass is always greener on the other side..Enjoyed reading this sweet poem.

Marty Owens

Date: 2/11/2010 4:17:00 PM

We saw the high 40's today and supposed to get into 50's in next few days....A heat wave HUH???? lol Take it easy in that recliner old boy!!!! Enjoyed your poem...Marty

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/11/2010 10:13:00 AM

Oh, Jared, Jared, what can I say? I live in Southern California where it's 65 degrees F today. I do remember though the tough winters of my childhood back in Bucharest/Romania. Brrrrr!!!! Winter has its charm as long as it's not toooo loooong. Keep warm, my friend :) Thank you for your comments.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2010 9:10:00 AM

I flee ..for the comfort of a hot sandy beach .. had quite enough of Mr. Winter ... another "beauty" tribute to Winter and its nasty icy fingers gripping our area.. need that golden brandy right about now.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2010 6:47:00 AM

Random, but full of imagery, which is what i look for most in poetry, Jared. Good job on your double acrostics. Hey, I didn't mean "shame" to be depressing! It was just my "take" on how I see it affecting people. I love psychology. Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2010 5:12:00 PM

Sounds very cold and uncomfortable from your descriptive verse penned here but the comfor of home sounds exceptional. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara