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Random Thoughts 33 a Villonnet

"Birthday Suit Biography 2" It is time to work my birthday suit, expose all my hidden muscles. Appeal to my cocky confidence, I'm dedicated in my pursuit. I'm taking the healthy route, because life is too important. health problems run in my family, it is time to work on my birthday suit. Heart disease, embedded in my roots, only I can make the change. Low weight, cutting my epidermis, I'm dedicated in my pursuit. It is time to work on my birthday suit, push hard, eat healthy, and stay dedicated in my pursuit. Jared Pickett 11/30/09 Asavvy1

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Moonbee Canady

Date: 12/4/2009 4:51:00 PM

Oh, Yeah ... Excellent Write ... If You Look Good ... You Feel Good ... If You Feel Good ... You Look Good ... MoonBee

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/3/2009 10:51:00 AM

Another fantastic write here Jared...great rhythm and rhyme scheme...thanks for sharing~Mary

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 8:22:00 AM

Have I told you lately just how Proud I am of you ? If not, I am...You are a wonderful poet...Love Dad

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/2/2009 7:27:00 PM

And remember to enjoy life and always be positive. It is good for the heart, keeps it at peace. Nice write and it is true, we must take care of our health. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my narrative. Your poet friend, Caroline.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 12/1/2009 10:25:00 AM

Bravo Jared! I'm feeling this same way, while still healthy, it's time to keep it that way. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/30/2009 12:23:00 PM

Salads with low fat dressings are good for keeping in shape ... exercise too. .. your birthday suit will look brand new... I like the way u put this poem together.. being very honest here oh cocky one!!! great to start New Year's resolutions early.. thankxxx for enjoying my poems today.. not done yet.. will post more later... luv.. "Sweetie" Soup Mail call ...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/30/2009 10:48:00 AM

23rd September if i remember,a libra like my mum..Work on your birhday suit,exercise ,healthy eating,walk and gym,a caramel swirl every now and then:)..lol... love your style my friend.. and hope you're standing cos you ve been tagged by Doris..do not sit ,till you hit..Charma:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2009 10:14:00 AM

Easy to write but hard to accomplish but it can be done. I had a TIA back in May of this year. Heart attack and death runs in my family in the males for I have no sisters. What I had is the same as a heart attack but of the brain. I had tests which showed no brain damage which means in the mist of the attack God was with me to carry me through. I have had to add a baby aspirin to my meds to help prevent another one. My blood work is always good with not abnormal labs. Why it happened??SK

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/30/2009 10:10:00 AM

Oh no don't remind me!! I tagged you to carry on the holiday tag game, james goff tagged me and now I pass the torch to you. see his poem and mine. Please sir!!