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Random Thoughts *30* Double Senryu

So extravagant, sweat glistens, her body oil. Juices, heaven sent. Skin, smooth like silk, my exotic Latin dame. Thrusting for her milk. Jared Pickett 10/28/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 1/15/2010 9:00:00 AM
Spicy Write! Enjoyed reading it
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Date: 12/2/2009 9:49:00 AM
Niceeeee...Well done son...Dad
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Date: 10/29/2009 12:20:00 AM
exotic and wild...excellent Jared:)Charma
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Date: 10/28/2009 2:42:00 PM
Excellent work, the amatory skill of this piece is on point. You rock with your erotic writes...Raul
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