Random Thoughts *30* Double Senryu

So extravagant, 
sweat glistens, her body oil.
Juices, heaven sent.

Skin, smooth like silk,
my exotic Latin dame.
Thrusting for her milk.


Jared Pickett
10/28/09
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 9:00 AM
Spicy Write! Enjoyed reading it
Pickett Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 9:49 AM
Niceeeee...Well done son...Dad
Chircop Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 12:20 AM
exotic and wild...excellent Jared:)Charma
Moreno Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Excellent work, the amatory skill of this piece is on point. You rock with your erotic writes...Raul
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